countilaw

This the first paragraph of his web site:

"We are the builder of some of the best flying birds! We have build planesfor Beginners to pro, and Our price is amazing! as well is the details that we put into each build we do! We build to be shown off!"

To put it correctly:

We are the builders of some of the best flying birds ( in what? the world, state or city) We have built planes from beginners to the pros, and our prices are amazing! As well are the details that we put into each build! (we do!) We build to be shown off! (what does that mean?)


These are the errors found in just the first four sentences? WOW !!! If he puts as much detail into his first four sentences of his advertisement, I can just imagine the "LACK" of details he puts into the "birds" he gets paid to build!!!!


A prime example of "No child left behind" in our educational system.

I think I will take my money elsewhere.

Frank