Rctom...I think you have something good to work with. One thing i might do is move the wings forward a little. Just looks too far back. I would also make the wings a little deeper. Looks too skinny. Can you take the standard edge wings and just cut the tips off a little. That would make it look a little more proportional. Just an idea and if it works i want half price on the one i am gonna buy...

Smokey