Looking better. Great improvment if you go back and take a look at what you first presented.

I wouldn't have a straight line ending with the yellow from tip to tip. I also believe you should remove a portion of it. Really not needed as you mentioned the "straight on" visibility.

The red is fine but the purple should be reduced in width.

The yellow fuselage color would appear stronger if you used more of it. On that model, I'd like to see the intersection of color change, way closer to the tail feathers. An angle is fine. Possibly even using a different color for "all" the tail feathers. Could keep the forward area of the fuse white and "all" of the tail feathers yellow.

BTW. The purple with yellow is too compplimentary. I'd rethink that.

White, orange and blue work well. May elect to try one, just to see how it comes out.

Orange is the safety color on top of wings on aircraft.

Good job and kudos on your effort. You are putting some time into this, but I believe it's worth it.

Lookin good!

Charles